All Comments on 'A Piece of Paradise'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Erotic Fantasy

Mature women who have secret desires are

so erotic.

A well written story which I hope will have a follow up upon her return home.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW & Hotter

Just about the strongest front to back story of heat I have read. I would have sworn you were of the opposite sex given your touch. Nice work except she didn't need to be a cheater and cuckolder - did she.<P>

Your talent didn't need that hook which distances some of us from your abilities.

lech126lech126almost 3 years ago

What an awesome story. Never a dull moment always keeping you on the edge.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story, came twice.

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