All Comments on 'A Place to Belong Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Chapter!

Glad to see you posted a new story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please write it quickly.

Tail End PeteTail End Peteover 15 years ago
Good job, girl!!

About time you started writing again and as always, you nailed it. Don't make us wait so long for the next one!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Thank you

This story starts out interesting and stays that way. Too long since your last submission. You grab my heart and hold it, I'm cheering for Marti to have a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
more more more how soon for more?

Ok got me hooked bring it on

spearman1spearman1over 15 years ago
One word!!

Marvelous!!

ebonygriotebonygriotabout 15 years ago
Beautiful narration

This was a pleasure to read. I hope there is more.

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