All Comments on 'A Promise Well Kept'

This is a great start. The characters are nicely drawn, and I can't wait to see more.

First, I rated it a 4 because I don't know if you are quitting here or if you plan to finish the story.

<BR>- - Second it doesn't appear to be written for a general audience (GA) unless a GA is defined as 80% female.

<BR>- - Third, the sleepy time act doesn't play well given a near drowning experience.

<BR>- - Fourth, she doesn't insist on knowing the little girl's outcome, especially given that you wrote her as thinking that she did/may have failed to save her.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

The story is a good start, but clearly, there are so many unresolved issues that to call it complete is hardly an accurate statement.

-- KK in Texas

you have to continue this story I want to know what happens!

PLEASE tell me there's gonna be more on this after such a promising start?!