All Comments on 'A Proper Send-off'

Great bit of patient writing.

I have read and re read this story so many times that now I want a sequel!

.....it leaves you begging for more! MORE!

I would read 76748490395867574 epilogues, 7543957295728 sequels, and even some prequels. AMAZING.

did not expect anything written so well, it took me a few days to finish, and Iam waiting for the sequels, have always wanted to take thoughts and put them into a story like you have done

I was delighted to read your story - both for the sex but also for the emotional content of your two characters. Keep writing.

That was the sexiest, most amazing story I've ever read. You really did a mind blowing job. PLEASE don't stop writing. You are PERFECT at it.

Really great. Couldn't put it down. Just perfect. Lots of love and just enough sex. Write more please!

This site is full of porn without plot or plot for the conveyance of porn. This here is plot with porn on the side.

Good work.

I've commented before about feeling doubtful about the "straight turned gay" plot line.

When it's well done, as it is here, I rationalize it as you fall in love with person, not the sex. So June may love Sarah, that doesn't mean she would love another woman.

Well done.

I've read this over and over and... You get the point

Please write a second part.

This was one of THE hottest stories in a serious long time! please please please write more!!!!!!!!

Nough said

Pleeeease Write a Story About Their Life Together ! I Loved This One So Much & i Really Want It To Continue ! This Story Was Amazing i Loved Their Playful Relationship !

Very well told and the pacing is very good. The long build up works as the characters are engaging and interesting.

After a long day of exams, I found myself engulfed by this plot. Im a lesbian and wish for a love story like this. The characters were great together especially June; she makes me want an Irish lassie to settle down with. I know this story is three years old, but keep writing!

That was incredibly hot. I'm not quite sure if I want to be Sarah or get fucked by her. A beautiful story about a strong but sensitive woman in uniform. Hot hot hot

Loved your story!! I hope more follows.

One of the best, if not the BEST story I've read ... Thank you!

Amazing story. Should be in a book somewhere. Maybe a part 2 in the future? (Pretty please???) Lol

I'm a straight guy and I wish I had a love like this.

I could read this story over and over again. Come to think of it, I have. Beautiful, moving and hot.

SWEESTESTTHING is definitely the BEST Name for the author of The Romance Story that will ALWAYS be at the Very Top of That List! Thank You Very Much!

Loved the story, wish I could print it out to read without internet. Love the military as well. ;-)

This is so sweet, exiting, warm, kinky, sensual, explosive, emotional and beautifully written. It's life itself. Like Sarah persuaded June into the lesbian lifestyle, SweetestThing surely encourages me to shift the course of my bisexual ways to a more lesbian one. I am overreacting a bit, but that's how I feel after having read this beautiful story. I am overthrown and overwhelmed.

This is probably one of my favorite stories. Its the go to story when I can't find anything else to pass the time.

curiosity turns into discovery turns into romance.

I only wish Sarah had spent as much time showing the wonders of tribbing and direct stimulation as the strap-on.

Best story yet. I love how you made this into an actual story. Great work

This out-of-this-world story tell us how wonderful a relationship can be and how love hopes can be a magic way to feed our souls. Even to be the leitmotiv of our whole being in this earth.

The absolutely amazing way to describe a strong and mature girl-girl love evolution is thrilling, subjugating, wonderful, arousing. One becomes addicted to their making love together in such a way that the only thing I missed was a description of their bed encounter after one year waiting for the second and everlasting love sharing.

The fact that Sarah is so amazingly good giving and receiving sex makes me feel that June might be in love (now or with the time) with her, but not necessarily becoming a lesbian. It is just a one time lesbian relationship. Without such a huge, tremendous, erotic loving woman who exceeds all possible male lovemaking expectations the option taken by June seems pretty obvious, considering having an open mind regarding the subject. Nevertheless, as soon as Sarah might not be available anymore, there is no certainty at all that June might look for another woman instead of a boyfriend. It will mainly depend on their sexual skills mainly and not on the genre.

Still, our romantic mind thinks and hopes for a real happy ending of the story, that is, this will become an amazing lifetime matching.

A world class novel, no doubt!

People with such a gift as SweetestThing to write and give the joy to the world to read them should be compelled to do it lifetime by a universal and unavoidable law

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As a soldier, i loved it. I've been there and had that all happen to me. but your story felt real. its a real life fantasy come true. I love your writing, i love your character development and how intense your sex scenes are. KEEP WRITING!!!!!

Very well written with witty dialogue and smooth story telling skills. This wasa pleasure to read.

Fantastic story! Thank you!,,

GREAT read! Utterly impressed.

Fantastic bit of writing!

Thank you.

I can't begin to even attempt explaining how moved I was - I am - by this story. It grabbed me from the very beginning and carried me ever so lustfully to the end. The heartache, the hunger, the heat all stirred up into this magnificent piece has given me more inspiration to continue my own stories and has even presented to me how to structure them. Your flow was on point along with your character definitions. You didn't give so much of every detail but enough to satisfy the visuals (completed by other minds) of vivid imaginations everywhere. Seriously, you've got skill, baby doll, and you know how to use it. -Xi

Made me giggle and feel like part of the story I loved it!

thank you so much :)

LOVED it, great story, hot.

This story was well written and great character development. As an Academy graduate Class of 1979 the last class to graduate all males. I was reminded about a roommate I had on my first posting. She was a newly commissioned officer like me. She and I were friends and roommates. The closely guarded secret was her sexual preference. We would laugh at the constant remarks about our living arrangements. Everyone assumed we were a couple. I still remember the fear of her secret ever getting out. We remained friends both completing 30 years. She and her wife have been friends through the years. This past summer we were at the Acadamy Class of 2013 with the first group of cadets who are openly gay. Equally important this was the second daughter of ours to graduate and second Liutenant. This too makes me proud. Your story had a well balanced story line that captured all of the emotions and fears that kept the reader engaged.

Touching Fic. Hoping a Sequel will grace us too. Sarah and June, Married, Sarah impregnating June, Babies, Etc

This is my 3rd time reading this over the years and I love it more each time. Thank you for sharing.

So good it made me wish I was female and a lesbian

I read this story all the time. Its a very sexy amazing love story. Great writting!

ghtful - a real treat - thanks!

I went to Vietnam just after Christmas. I wish I had a present that sweet for a sendoff!

Very good story.

so well done and thank you for brining the end together;)

L

This isn't a five-star story. It's a ten. One of the best written erotic stories I've ever read, sexy as hell, funny, and sweet. Thank you so much for writing it.

by far the best romantic novela i've ever read, it wasnt even an erotic novel. the eroticism simply served to enhance the romance. it was brilliant, i was literally crying by the end

one of the best ever .

This was one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading! Thank you so much for all you put into it!!!!!

Wow!

It was really great and It was more of a romantic story.

I think you should start writing some books! They'll sell well!

I didn't think this story would've been any good but, you proved me wrong. Dude this story was freaking awesome

One of the best!

You created believable lovable characters, your writing is excellent, and best of all you left me with warm fuzzies. Thx!

One of the best lesbian stories on the site - and I've read quite a lot. It keeps drawing me back.

Spending a tour overseas--they dream of being with those they love again. This is a well-written example of such a story. It's hot, too, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thanks for posting.

Great story and well put together. Awesome. I'm a sucker for happy endings

Every time I read this, I end up loving it more and more.

Holy shit, this was amazing, I thought it would have a tragic end or some shit but damn, that's beautiful

This is my favourite story on this site. Well written, moving and hot as hell. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Please write more! This was amazingly hot and sweet and funny all at the same time!

I loved it well written all around perfection best story ever!!!!!!

Love this story... So well written, sexy and with an ending that makes you smile. Hope to hear about the girls again... An updated story.

This is still by far one of the best pieces of writing, that I have ever read. Its been almost I year since I first read it and its still fucking amazing. You win

sexy and erotic AND heartfelt and romantic. i both got off to and awwed at the end of this story

But all in All a Very good story.

5 Stars for Sure.

Well Done

Now I have to go read your other entries.

Ramjet

I loved it. I just wanted more sex when Sarah returned!

You could write professionally

This is my second time reading it. I love romantic stories. So good so sensually exciting.

Very romantic. Loved it

And it's just such a fabulous story.

The storyline, the charchters, and the mind blowing sex scenes.

Just beautiful

I think that I have met each of these characters at different times of my like. But here they all came together. Most believe, and realistic description of life and love.

This is the best girl-girl romance story I've read on this site. Period, hands down, no question. I know you're probably hella busy, but would you consider making a second part to this story? I'm sure it'd be just as amazing as this one is.

This (outstanding) story is just part of the reason I'm switching sides. A conscious decision based on my own events that are not too dissimilar from this story.

Love.

That is the most EROTIC story that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You truly do have a gift.....

amazing story, my only regret is not reading it sooner. I loved the character development and backgrounds just as much as the sex

First time I read the story I needed a quick fix so I skimmed to the juicy parts.. Now I've read the story afresh and I absolutely love it. You are very talented SweetestThing, thanks for taking the time to write this.

One of the best stories I have read. I loved the ending as I love happy endings. The characters were great. The interaction between the two really made the story. The sex helped also!! I guess I am just a sucker for romantic stories. I'll be reading more of your stories.

SB

Fantastically written. Wished it went on longer.

Wonderful characters.

You should be proud of this.

Great dialogue, not a lot of people know how to write entertaining banter, but you do. The sex scenes were pretty decent as well, though we didn't get to see the licking that was promised :-)

You are such an amazing writer. That was one hell of a story and one hell of a roller coaster ride of emotions.. The love making part was amazing!! Really great story unique and one of a kind. I didn't really expect that the sex part would be connected to the title like that. WOW. JUST WOW.. 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Absolutely fantastic piece

After all these years, this story is still the benchmark for what truly good writing on this site can be. The characters, the plot and the sex are bar none. Combine the three, and you won't find a dry seat for anyone who reads this! You should be proud of this work and the countless people you've left horny and frustrated (including me!), lol.

Anonymous

01/05/16

...simply the best (and I'm a straight white male)

Every few months or so I come back to this story. I love the depth you gave to Sarah and June in only 7 pages. And thankfully the actual sex was thoughtful, sexy, and passionate without being cheesy or cliché. Strong work. This is by far in my top 5 stories here. Cheers!

You write some of the best erotica I have ever read. I'm so pleased to see you're writing again after a long break.

Please continue to do so. The story's, the passion, sensuality, everything, beautiful.

Tank you

Im debating if its the best story ive read or just one of the best to be fair to Coleen myr favorite author

love the characters, dialogue, HOT HOT sex

Def in my personal Hall of Fame...!

Fave story and author.

The people seem so realistic! Conversations flow so well, beautiful build up, left me with a warm fuzzy feeling. Definitely my favourite on this site

It's extremely realistic, and it incorporates history and present! I love the characters, the build up, everything! I am favoriting everything. Love it.

wow... i loved the whole thing.. it wasnt what i was looking for but was hooked from the first paragraph. Even kept reading after i was 'done' because i wanted to know how it ended. 5 stars

Like Roverone, I've read and reread this story at least three times. Each time I have tried to figure out how to give you seven,eight or more stars. Any suggestions? Great prose, plot, characters and incredibly HOT sex. More, Please??

This is awesome. Loved the entire story and went back to the start for more. Great story line, great characters and not to mention great sex

Love it even more. Thank you

In reading this story, one thing kept hammering in my head. I don't want it to END. I admit I was totally lost in this tale of finding love. You weave a mean story that had craving for the never ending of it. Oh well. My compliments on a job well done. Continue to bewitch us with your stories of love. For I am a fan. May The Great Spirit bless you.

I read this story several years ago and loved it. Great to revisit an old friend :)

the tension was high strung

very romantic

I liked your story more than any other on Literotica

Thank you so much

I can't even guess how many times I've read this story, but it never gets old. It's still one of the best love stories on lit, regardless of category.

This is the best erotic story I have read in books or on the internet. I loved it!!

This is the best story here, the love they feel and the sex they have

It made me cum and it made me cry

Beautiful, thank you

Helen xx