All Comments on 'A Proper Send-off'

What a well-written and romantic story!! So erotic!

Now that there... That was something.

Why the hell do I keep reading this story ... over and over?

Because it's that good.

Agree, only second time reading but still as good.

I think I've read this story four times now, and every time I reach the end and go "Wait, that's it?!"

Expertly written, absolutely a fave, and while I want more, it's ended in a very lovely spot.

Fantastic!

Another great story. As a veteran myself, I especially appreciate it. I love it. And very well written too.

Awesome story, I am adding it to my favs right now so I can find it easily again, and again…

Great story, really enjoyed it. Good balance and pacing.

great

I haven't read this story in such a long time, and it's always popping back up in my reading suggestions

Oh my God, I adore the entire story, it really entices the reader in, the characters are amazing and there are quite a few LOL moments as well, which literally made me smile reading along.

I really hope you write more, as this is literally one of the best stories on this site.

I wish I could rate this more than 5 stars

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Excellent… 5 stars ⭐️, I know it would have made your story longer, but those conversations in the bar could have had perhaps more details… also an inner thought process of June that would convey some hints of feeling and thoughts of Sarah would have helped connecting to her 2 nights offer…I know the story is from Sarah’s view… but you did pitch in June thoughts at time… anyway loved it… thank you

Gods, I wish I could've given this excellent story more than 5 stars!

I think this was the third time I've read this sweet story.

Loved it!!!

Wow! I am a veteran also, spent 4 yrs in the Army, but that is the most intriguing story I have ever read. It is also the way the story ended that intrigued me. It's a story that keeps on giving!! I ain't a lesbian, but I'd like to be. lol

Deserves more than 5 stars. Very picky with my Lit stories, but this has always been one of my favs

Nope, doesn't quite cut it does it.? The root problem is the same as most of this type of genre. In reality, doesn't matter whether you call it gay or lesbian or homosexual or queer, the relationships are all about self. The actions are about selfishness, what you want, when you want it, how you want it. The analogy would be to music, you're trying to both play melody when it's supposed to be a harmony.

What a great story. I would so hang out at June’s bar. Now, I gotta put a reminder on the calendar to read again on early Nov!

That was really good! Great story, well written with plenty of emotion.

Loved it. Look forward to more of your work.

Wonderful!!!

I loved the characters, their banter and developing relationship woven throughout the story.

A great love story, very erotic.

Hopefully you’re still writing under a different non de plume. Good stuff!

Know you no longer share here but never tire of reading this piece for umpteenth time. Simpjy one of the best. Thanks whatever/wherever.