by WillowPuss
i liked parts of it the beginning and the end, the writing seemed different in the large mid-section of this story. it changed the tone of the story quite abrubtly, but nice plot line... shame the seduction in the first part was cut short though.
Do girls really get turned by such a spanking? I'm not sure about that part, but it built up to a great climax!
Thanks for this.
Lukas
fantastic story. this could make a great film if only.
but i know it can,t. but none the less fantastic bit of writing do hope you do a follow up. here one that would love to read that jim.