by Tantala
A lovely concatenation of sexual delights.
Please decide whether her name is Gloria or Georgia...
Beautiful and sexy. I came reading this.
My panties have never been so wet.
Thank you baby.
Loved the story. Gave it 5 stars, even though it stretched out with them trying to get some privacy (which I understand is the point of the story). How could anyone still be worked up and horny after all that running around?
for the most part, i loved this story. it was deliciously frustrating as you dragged out their eventual coupling, but irritating when you changed between gloria and georgia, as others have mentioned already. you also failed to remember that it was the older woman's bikini bottom that was left behind, rather than her top.
I really liked this story, it was both hot and sensual. As others have said, the only confusion was the switch between Georgia and Gloria. Other than that it was great.
Yes, I noticed the Gloria/Georgia thing too, but I imagine that the author's two characters were so caught up in the ecstasy of the moment that they really can't be held accountable for what came out of their mouths. (And I think I was as engrossed and excited as they were.) I've seen this author's work on this site and elsewhere, but this is the first story I've really read. Too bad for me. In particular, Anne working Overtime has always appeared intimidatingly long, but I now have the curiosity and courage to tackle it.
It was so hot and sexy I swear. Amazing.
Only thing I noticed was the way you kept switching from Georgia to Gloria.
What can I say except a very, very HOTTTT story.. I do hope that you will continue with their excapades..
Paul