All Comments on 'A Quick Afternoon Swim'

First, I'll say that the story was very well written. But when she asks "your place or mine?" and he answers "how about dinner" I was left scratching my head. As a young man who just got done fingering a gorgeous girl making her climax, and who now has a no doubt painful erection, why would dinner pop into his mind?

I guess you're trying to be romantic, but the premise of the story is not romantic. No college student I know would put off an offer of immediate satisfaction so he could take a very horny girl to a fancy dinner.

Plus, the main character seems desperate to impress her with all his nice things, which not only makes him an idiot, but a prick as well.

One last thing, break up your paragraphs,especially the sex scenes, its hard to read through large blocks of texts.

the story was well written.... but right after the sauna I think someone needed almost immediate action... then you

could have had dinner and done it all over again. The interlude was a big letdown, sorry.

when it is that hot, people don't lounge around in hot tubs or saunas.

I don't know about the critics, but some people are always looking for something to complain about. I thought that you story was very good and very hot. Hot enough that I looked to see if you've written more and was happy to see you had, but disappointed to see it was 1 1/2 years ago. I hope you will write more often!

Very fun and hot story. Hope to read more about these two. Hot characters and hot sex.

Predictable and boring.

No imagination.

The rich boy and the trophy girl.

Big yawn. Who cares?