by VertigoJ
The story made this act of incest very romantic. I gave it a 4, but I wished there was a 4 1/2!
Thanks.
No porn, just feelings that arouse the soul instead of body!
:)
Look forward to read more of you.
Carlo, Milano
Beautifully written but might have been even better with the last 8 or at least the last 5 paragraphs omitted.Having tuned up your readers imaginations so effectively the additional explanation was a bit superfluous.