All Comments on 'A Quiet Embrace'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very touching

The story made this act of incest very romantic. I gave it a 4, but I wished there was a 4 1/2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very quiet, very good.

Thanks.

No porn, just feelings that arouse the soul instead of body!

:)

Look forward to read more of you.

Carlo, Milano

ishtatishtatover 19 years ago
Sex in the mind

Beautifully written but might have been even better with the last 8 or at least the last 5 paragraphs omitted.Having tuned up your readers imaginations so effectively the additional explanation was a bit superfluous.

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Needs a few more chapters

Freedom at its best!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow that sucked

And boring. *

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