All Comments on 'A Rectal Rampage'

I should have stopped there. But like a fool, I read the story. It was just as bad as I thought it would be, given the introduction. There wasn't a single character in this mess that was worth rooting for or that you created any interest in. Lacking any type of clever writing, this just wasn't worth the time spent reading it. UGH!

this is one of the worst stories I have read, and I have read some bad ones it is a good thing this is only 1 part, I do not think I could read anymore of it, I had to skip page 2 and then read only the last of the 3rd page, and I still thought it was bad

Only a straight man would write this kind of vomit & believe it was erotic lesbian love. Wait, only a misogynist straight man would be this vile & disgusting. Go away you clueless nitwit. Post your junk on a public toilet wall, thats the best place for your idea of storytelling.

Taylor

It was very off-putting that you kept confusing the names of Tracy and Karen. Better proofreading is essential.