All Comments on 'A Room with a View'

That was a very good story but there was one aspect of it that caught my attention. The conversations between them seemed more like the dialogue of two people conducting a business transaction rather than arranging and carrying on an affair.

Wish that could happen to me! Want to read what happens next...chapter 2 ???

Man you sure know how to write. There's passion without smut. I loved it. WOW!

Foxe

I have to agree with saw man1 there is absolutely no passion or lust in their dialogue. It almost sounds forced no intimacy.

Nice story

dialog is evident and almost prudish. i wanted her to let her hair down and steep herself in passion. otherwize a nice read.

Now that I've passed "that certain age," I can appreciate this couple very much because I've had experiences that were similar in tone if not all the details.

I've always thought the brain was the most important sexual organ and these two would agree with that, I think. Talking about what they like, teasing each other secure in the knowledge that they'll soon have each other, knowing who they are and what they need and want, and being able to enjoy each moment of the build-up is a really quite wonderful way to have and enjoy sex. I hope all the readers are able to experience this at some time. In the meantime, I'm off to read more from this couple.

the sexual tension developed smoothly, and i really was excited for the slow buildup..then the loving itself , sort of like sexual edging , became ever more thrilling! great technique...

Very good well made up story and so sexy a thought to happen.