All Comments on 'A Rose By Any Other Name'

The opening scene is a great example of male attraction. I loved the way the narrator walked me through the nature of his physical desire for She of Many Names. The rest was a nice little sex romp, and you have quite a way with the details.

I'm also surprised that there is no number after the title to indicate a series. Unless you introduced two characters intending to violate Chekhov's Law of Porn: If a hot woman is introduced in the first act, her clothes had better go off by the third. :P

A pretty fantastic start. Look forward to reading more.