All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 04'

I am torn on who I will dislike more... Bags or Viv! You created another character you have to like and hate at the same time. I don't know what poor Queen Evie is going to do with all these baddies running around!

When you put a virgin Queen on the throne, uneducated in the ways of nobility, you're sure to draw them out of the woodwork. Viviane may be the foil for our dark and powerful wizard, playing nobility and commoner alike. Another strand in the tangled web. Well done!

He needs to be brought back from the dead and given his own story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. He is fascinating character (and a fine one too) I will check your page to see if you honor my request. Thanks for sharing your talent Talynnda!

Interesting, one stable hand not affected by fade, his best friend immune to sex magic!