All Comments on 'A Sea of Sex'

by RAMJET69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very, very good

but you write too well to fall prey to mixed metaphors: 'in the science of sex appeal, that dress should either be illegal or get the pulitzer prize' ejected me right out from an otherwise magnificent story.

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