All Comments on 'A Second Chance'

needs outside editor to make it a five. lots of bad grammar.

Great story about recovery. Read comments about some grammar issues however I saw nothing tto detract form the wonderfully rebirth tale. Thanks for sharing.

Good story, but you have a couple of things to rewrite. first who is Bonnie? (search for it), second, David just finished saying he had forgot to get her phone number or email address, but then proceeded to phone her. -1*

Enjoyable even on second read. Will be back. Ever considered a chapter 2?

This definitely need chapter two, please

Hopeful. Weathering stormy periods are better for ascertaining character and compatibility than just pleasant/fair weather friends.

Bobbie/Bonnie - both names used for same person. Otherwise very enjoyable. thank you

Wonderful, 10 stays! Please write another chapter, because Bobbie needs a mom to guide her to womanhood and Kerry needs a dad to spoil her more. Also, the baby in Amy's tummy needs mammy and daddy!

PROOF READ

You have good stories, but they lack from lack of proof reading

Sweet, tender, and romantic

Best story I have read in a long time.

Great story. Would have been even better (6) with an epilog or even a chapter 2. Thank you.

Enjoyed your work nice story kind of sugary sweet for Lit and no conflicting areas BUT ain't a thing wrong with it ! *****

Get a notepad and use it to keep track of the character's names. The ending seemed to be rushed, like the author ran out of steam or patience. There were some spelling errors. 3.5 Stars.

Great story! Is David's daughter's name Bobbie or Bonnie? Or is this a a subtle suggestion that a sequel story is being written wherein David's daughter has a split personality disorder? (Seems unlikely but giving the author the benefit of the doubt here.)