by TheThoth
Derek?! But why didn't she recognize his voice??
Not a bad story.....
Whenever I read a noncon story that is written by a man but trying to tell it from the woman's point of view, and he blithely describes how she is sodomized first and then "gladly" fucks his cock in her pussy next.....ew. Bacterial vaginosis. Infection of the vagina by bacteria, transferred from the colon. Most women I know who have ever even had a yeast infection and had to work to get their body balance back in their poor puss (and probably did not feel sexy until they did) is not likely to be turned on by such details, even in fantasy. Not sexy. Unhygenic, ignorant, and gross.
There is a reason a lot of stories on here follow the mouth-pussy/maybe mouth again-pussy/ass dead-last structure of story. Less chance of getting completely thrown out of a good fantasy by imagining shit being plunged up one's twat.