by touchmate
Great writing.... Foreplay itself exhilarating .... Fiveplay too... Keep going man
The concept and the visualisation are very good. There is a small problem though. You change from 1st person to 3rd person narration constantly.
Thanks for sharing this story. You handled the plot with sensitivity and care, allowing the characters to fall in love with each other.
Good build up and each of them culminating in mind blowing sex - well done