All Comments on 'A Sentimental Heart Ch. 14'

I enjoyed this quintessentially English romance from the start. It's like a frothy spring day, sunny and sweet.

I hope you'll treat us to another one.

for this chapter. It's been a long-time waiting. :-)

I hope that you'll keep writing.

Huge sigh of relief that you finished this story! Thank you.

I'm so glad you finished this (and so soon after I discovered it!) but it felt a little anti-climactic to me. I don't think it's right or fair that you never let Miranda be mad at Marcus to his face. I get that she's a giving kind of person, to a fault, but I really feel that their relationship can't grow and last without them learning to communicate better--- which means she has to tell him why she decided it was best to leave; that she felt rejected and hurt by his changeable attitude and repeated coldness.

I like it but it wasn't a good ending. it was just pretty much them getting back toget her but I still like it thanks.

you are a tease..... Thanks for a great story....

What happened to Peter and Amanda??

You have to write a follow up story..

.... Because you seem to get bored of your own writing towards the end. I mean, this story had a promising beginning. In the end, though, everyring just fizzled out. It's really, really putting off.

That was wonderful.it just shows that a good writer does not need porn to write Romance.

Ed

to a saga with no conclusions.

a simpering attempt at putting an edge on Peter, Mr. Milquetoast

a question raised in the last sentence to Miranda, one to which she does not know the answer

and the big shot himself tries to show some frailties. but still bullies his way around as if entitled.

meh

any relationship that comes from this much dysfunction will need the services of the nurses attending to the patriarch of this immature clan. The nicest person in the lot was Mrs. Rogers.

At the 5 primary characters inability to communicate. I found little in the 14 chapters to show me why one character would be attracted to another beyond looks and sex and those dwindle with time while communications remains the foundation of a relationship.

I appreciate all the effort you put in to writing romance for this site.

Are you fucking serious? He doesn't apologize for treating her like shit and then she thanks him for loving her?! Disgusting.

Phew - everyone is okay. Your story was so well done! Grabbed me from the beginning and devoured it to the last! You did very well, even with some awkward word choices that a 'checker' would not pick-up!

LOL, just read the story aloud - they will be evident! Well done