All Comments on 'A Shewolf Takes a New Mate Ch. 02'

by BlackandWhiteKnight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow

I can't wait for Chapter 3!! This is really good! Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Diagram...

Again with the ovaries! Eye color changed from brown to green.

BlackandWhiteKnightBlackandWhiteKnightabout 10 years agoAuthor
Working on part 3

Mallory's eyes are indeed brown just for the records, thank you for pointing that out... whoever you are. Working on the next one, but also working 60+ hours a week just now, so I'll be a little bit slow with the 3rd part, but I'll try not to disappoint when I get this out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It talks about how she’s such a nice person and kind hearted, her she essentially coerces a guy and infects him with a curse that enslaves him to her for the rest of his life without any real consent or acceptance on his part. It seems like she’s a very selfish person rather than a nice person. She mind controls him and then makes him eat his friends? Yea, not something a nice person would do.

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