All Comments on 'A Short Tease'

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PhilD13PhilD13about 12 years ago
Good light bondage

Nicely done. I'm not a big fan of bondage, but it worked so well in this story and helped heighten the overall experience.

How each person's clothes were removed was handled excellently as well, an often overlooked aspect.

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