by RogueLoad
I can't remember reading a story quite like this one. In a follow up story the lad could make another outlandish request which to his amazement she again agrees to. In fact she is unable to refuse him anything...
I think he needs to fuck his mom since she let him cum on her face, make her his lover. He has her thinking about his sex life and just where he takes it is infinite.
Thanks
I agree to the other two. A sequel woul be nice where he asks her for a fuck.
I love the premise of your story, my only complaint is that it was so short. Please continue to write it and, feel free to take your time in describing detail and really let your mind go with the kink... it's good so far.
Regardless, I think you probably know all that, thanks for writing.
The story was great. The detail and thoughts were great. Please continue the story with thought from both mother and son. Possibly that she can't stop how horny she now feels for her son.
and get her pregnant so she would have a retarded sibling for him to help raise and who would like incest like the retards that get off on this perverted nonsense.
Liked your story. My Mom was my first fantasy, and I still get hard thinking about her today. For those that do not like the subject material, fuck off! What do you think Incest is all about you Moron!
Very good story, loved the little touches that showed what the characters were thinking. Loved it!
Can't wait to see what you and Mom cum up with next.
Great story! You need 2 write more!!
Suggestion: Describe the mother - like her hair color, length, eyes, tits. LOOK FORWARD TO MORE
Short stories are not my piece of cake, but this one surprised me. It would have been better if you had built it up a little more just so that the whole scenerio wouldn't seem rushed. I am looking forward to read the next chapter and she how the situation escalates. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work. Bus as I said, I usually prefer longer stories. ^__^
great, loved it, plz the same witch Tit-Fucking :)
5/5
super hot story , lots of potential to make it into a series ; some tit fucking , face fucking , anal , etc.. , but make sure that he gives her a facial each time
I hope you turn this into a series featuring the same mother and son.
A very good first story! Good story line and well written. I look forward to more from this author--and soon
write more!!!
would love to see him pushing his mother further and further, with new fantasies..
THAT WAS FUCKING HOT! I CAME EVERYWHERE WHILE READING THAT! EASILY THE GREATEST MOM EVER!!! AHHHHH!!!! IM SOOOOOOO HORNY!!!!!!!!!!
Original and erotic. To the lone dissenter, why are you reading incest if it isn't your cup of tea? A sign of stupidity or feeling guilty about something? Author good first effort. As suggested by others, a lot of possibilities to continue. thanks.
I completely agree with everyone here. Probably the best story I've read. You've kept it stripped down enough for us to envision our own scene but filled it with enough cumsploding action to make us want more and more and more! Please keep writing!
lol i was laughing during most of that quite funny i would of liked to see her want to continue it in another story etc or the son ask for more
My mom was still young when I reached puberty, and I fantasized about her all of the time. I thought the brevity of the story was perfect for masturbating to--and I DID! Thank you for inspiring me to a great orgasm! The story was more erotic to me because there WASN'T more sex in it. It felt realistic--the kind of question I wish I could have mustered the courage to ask my own mother. And the description of the son's cumshot was one of the hottest I've ever read! Absolutely outstanding. Please give us more of the "chapter-length" fantasy style that you are obviously a master of. I will, however, be reading this one over and over....
Pretty damn close.
Wasn't my mother, but most of the mature women mothers of friends, teacher etc. more the big titted stocky ones than the thin delicate type were my ideal. Yes that isn't incest but the feelings seem sooo close.
This is a great short story. Begging for more, but even standing in its own it is very hot and direct. I would love to know more of their backstory and their future. Don't stop writing!
He was very profuse with the verbal gratitude afterwards took. No barbarian, he eh? This is just a stroke story but it's a very good one. Nice, low key humor with off-kilter disarming narrative from start to sticky finish.
why doesn't he ask where he really should blow his load? The best place for any boy who's hot for his mom is right up his mother's mommy-hole, the very same hole the boy came out of as a little baby years before. Let's be frank--when a mother and her son want to seriously mess around, there's only one place for the boy to stick his big stiff prick and unload his young balls. It's his own mother's twat or coochie or cooze, or gash or quim. His own mother's CUNT!
Even for fantasy I find this implausible. But I did like the line "good, I wouldn't be sleeping in an orphanage tonight "
... isn't there a second chapter? With the son asking 'Mom, can I cum in your pretty mouth?' and the then ending with 'Mom, can I cum in your sweet pussy?'
RogueLoad, if you're reading this, please write more!
my mom usually saves my cum and drinks it when we fuck she pours it in her mouth until she chokes and pours the rest on her body and in her pussy. its actualy really sexy. my mom has the best pussy ever
There's not much that would excite me more than to stand in front of my Mother while she was on her knees watching her son masturbate his cock from start to finish while she whispered words of encouragement. It would be spectacular when I got down to the short strokes, pinched the head of my erection and shot rope after warm rope of my creamy Son Cum all over her pretty face and into her brunette hair. DAMN MOM..! That was really fun to give you a facial. Thanks honey... I enjoyed it as well. Maybe we'll do this again some time. Then to top it all off, Mom leaned forward and took the head of my cock into her warm mouth and sucked the remaining cum from it.
I keep coming back to this story. It's so plausible and believable. Very well written.
I enjoyed the story. The most erotic part was when the mother wimpered. It is erotic to me to have a description of the woman enjoying the sexual encounter or action. I really like having the woman's perspective on her enjoyment of the activity.