by bassbelly
The idea was good but you need to put a little thought into the story line. Next time try putting some feelings from the other people especially the ones who end up having sex. You should also have some proof read your work before you submit it. It was a good first try and I hope you write more stories.
Everyone knows, a son has to have a big fat piece of cock meat in order to have any hopes of his mother ever sucking it. What mother would break the serious taboo of incest for a little cock? None. But there are plenty of mothers who will get their mouths watering for a nice fat sausage even if its their sons. Capiche.
Size does not matter. Any Asian males into m/s incest. We have been into it for the past 5 years. I am now 31 and she is 60. Size did not matter. How I seduced her was letting her see me naked each morning to wake me up with an erection. Without a doubt,this excited her as she was always eager to "wake me up" so she could look at my erect penis, which measures 6.5 inches. I finally was able to talk her into doing a hand job on me before I left for college each day,which eventually led to oral sex and finally everything, but only with a condom. This took a lot of courage on her part as she did not want my father or sister to discover our secret. We still see each other, but it is even more difficult because of my wife who is suspicous.
The build-up and sex description needs some improving.
Prior Anonymous,
ninety per cent of the world have size between 5 and 7 inches.Your´s is not small(same size of me, but i´m a small guy, five foot seven).And incest when happens,it´s because several factors and not only one(size in that case).
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I like how the family was willing to do whatever it took to help Greg with his problem.
Your story started out good, but went downhill from there. You tapped into a psychosis that does hit some boys and men, but you rushed the "treatment" and the subsequent agreement with the other two women. This could have easily been a 3 or 4 page story as we see the therapy, and the effect it has on him. Even though you uncovered the fact that he was a late bloomer at the end, the story still lacks substance, character development (You hinted at it, though), and detail. Too fast and too short for the subject matter you wrote about. Think about rewriting it and see where you can take it. I'll bet it will turn out to be a great story if you do that
really enjoyed this storey but want to ear a lot more about his little cock, how anal went, did mommy like it in her pussy and lot's more...x
stupid people who cares about size if I was a girl I rather have a small or avarge size not some freak of nature
Pulled back from the brink by a blowjob, aren't sisters wonderful!
A short but very interesting story. Sad how fragile the male psyche is, but nice that familial support can nurture it. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.