All Comments on 'A Ski Trip to Hell'

by Bakeboss

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hathorbr1hathorbr1almost 12 years ago
Not Bad!

It was a good story! Good Job!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years ago
It was okay

I like stories of romance between married or otherwise committed persons. However, I would have preferred omitting the drugs and it could have used some better editing.

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 14 years ago
A Bit Rushed

Nice idea but you could have teased it out a bit slower - played with the marital emotions a tad more.

Anyway, I enjoyed it and good luck in the contest.

lancewmlancewmover 14 years ago
Loved it

Wonderful, heart warming read. Could have left out the E..

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Don't give up hope

I liked the advice at the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A true love story

A great story on rekindled love. The author showed he knows true love

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ecstasy?????

Could have been a good story, but the vast majority of your readers don't use Ecstasy.....Could have been a believable story, but nope....

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Pleasantly surprised....

-pistolpackinpete

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