All Comments on 'A Slave's Journey Begins Ch. 11'

You should have wrapped this up at about chapter 4. It's gotten boring. Look at the plunging number of views in the last few chapters. Nobody is reading this drivel. Stop while you're behind.

MidtownKitten, I am really enjoying this story series! This is one of those that I don't want to come to an end! Thanks for all your efforts, and sharing your talent with us. :)

MastersWench

Don't pay any attention to nony. If they weren't so gutless they would get accounts and post it under that.

Please don't take any bad comments to heart. I love this story and look forward to the next chapter!

Ignore the hater and write for those of us who love your story. I keep logging in to Lit looking for your next chapter. One of my favorite stories. Thanks for your efforts, there are those of us who appreciate your creativity.

Ohhh my god!! This story is Amazing. Please do

Chapter 12, 13, 14 or as many as it takes!!!! I want to know more about this universe you've created. Keep it up.

Loving your story, so many great characters offing input from different perspectives, very soap opera like. Makes for a more interesting and deeper story. Well done and written. Looking forward to the next chapters.

I love your story. I have read all chapters & can't stop reading. Soooooooo looking forward to the next chapters, I don't want this to end......

This is an amazing story! Ignore the haters!!! Characters are great! Xx

please continue this story. Some people are unhappy if their Ice Cream is cold. After a long build up toward the "Banquet" there were not many details please give us Tara's view and maybe Siara.