by Midnight Angel
Very gripping. I agree the category shouldn't be SciFi, I suggest Erotic Horror instead. That category is all about edge erotica. Read some stories and you'll find horror topics can be quite erotic, if written well.
Which is what we have here, so 5/5.
RR
Great story, nice and twisted and I like your writing stile. But like someone else pointed out should be filed under erotic horror so it would get the "audience" so to say, that it deserves.