All Comments on 'A Soldier's Tale'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
question...

...what happened to his girl? wasn't she in the backseat? other than that, thanks for the diversion during my work day. keep writing.

Tail End PeteTail End Peteover 14 years ago
great story

gritty, short, to the point, and covered all the bases. hey, anonymous, go back and read it one more time where they drove to the city center and dropped off the girl. thanks for your time and effort in writing this story.

tail end pete

Tail End PeteTail End Peteover 14 years ago
great story

gritty, short, to the point, and covered all the bases. hey, anonymous, go back and read it one more time where they drove to the city center and dropped off the girl. thanks for your time and effort in writing this story.

tail end pete

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sorry

A "Brit" story. Not my cup of tea.

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
A SHOOT AND SCOOT

and not one of your volition. TK U MLJ LV NV

bruce22bruce22about 7 years ago
An Initial Card.

But it could have been the whole story if it was elaborated. One thing is for sure, I do not have the slightest idea where this one is going!

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