All Comments on 'A Son's Question Ch. 02'

there was no dialog, no tension, it was flat and dead as a story - more imagery is needed, to flesh out the sequence of events

This is an excellent story of hot incest between a boy and his father. Look, they're both guys, they love the hell out of each other, they've both got stiff pricks that need a nice tight asshole and a pair of balls that need to get unloaded up a friendly cunt. The boy spreads his ass cheeks for his daddy, and poppa lets his boy up his ass. So the son gives his dad his sweet young twat and his daddy gives his boy his seasoned fatherly cunt. Each blows his balls to great satisfaction. It's just son and father bonding at its best.

Loved the anal sex bit. Often wonder what it would be like to have a real cock up my ass.

Pedestrian...no tension, no back story, no build up. Sorry writer, don't want to be mean, hope you take this as a critique. Maybe the story was just too short to create an inner world.