by dirtyjoe69
Love it when I am ready for a new experience in the world of the forbidden fruit and erotic feel of the mother fuckers I now. A must have for the sweet and erotic incest you are amenable to. I love being a cross dresser and mother fucking bitch.
That was pretty hot. But it was brief. Id love to hear that story expanded in great detail, and then record an audio to go with it. Because I love the sound of your voice.
I lost interest so fast, it wasn't even funny!
This style doesn't work at all in this case!
I can't understand what all the grumpy nay-sayers are yapping about. This is an unusual yet very pleasing vignette of hot motherfucking. When his mother pulls down her boy's shorts to massage his groin she gasps, "Holy shit!" He'd warned her that he's grown a lot, but his mother is still stunned and delighted by the fat meaty prick her boy's got swinging between his strong young legs. There are plenty of mothers, probably most of them, who'd love to take a good look at how big their son's dick has grown now that he's in his late teens. It's the most natural thing there is, mothers have a strong affection for what makes their darling boy a boy. Here the mother can't keep her hands off her son's big prick and he quickly gets hard ("Show it hard for mom!" as boys joke among themselves). After the son slurps his mother's tasty twat, "Yum!" he grins, mom invites him to revisit the cunt he came out of--now with his man-sized dick! The story mirrors the quick spontaneity of a boy shoving his stiff prick up his "momma's hot cunt" whenever he's given the chance. He's got a pair of hot young balls loaded to the brim, he's dying to give his rich semen to his beloved mother, right up between her legs. Where else does a boy's potent young sperm belong but up his own mother's twat?
DO NOT WRITE LIKE AGAIN. Total waste of space. Just...NO!
Truly awful!
I have lost hope in ever expecting a story worth reading from you on the subject of mom & son.
No one in today's time speak's in this stilted manner. The use of contractions is the common practice today. I'm instead of I am, you're instead of you are, we're instead of we are, etc. It's too difficult to read your story, It's not real!
Take some time to develop the story, then write it with correct grammer, content, and character development. It has real potential, but not the way it's written. The "critic" that said "See Dick fuck, see Jane suck" has you pegged, try to be a little more creative.
There is nothing wrong with the premis of the two people talking, but it needs to be better done. When you sacrafice the images you need more descriptive words and imagery. There are spots where there are only a few lines dedicated to an act or description. It makes the story feel rushed and incomplete.
Hey not bad, as for the other people read the 1st paragraph it says it is speech
Well if that wasnt a wasted few minutes of my life... Good grief Charlie Brown...what a blockhead...
You should apologize to everyone who took the time to read this piece of crud.
that was so stupid. not even hot in the least bit. try reading it before turning it in next time.
"This whole story is just speak between mother and son."
Don't you read what you've written?
"This whole story is just speak between mother and son."
Don't you read what you've written?
Really, dumb, stupid, and tacky approach; unrealistic; and words are not spelled right.
what the hell are you thinking? THAT was without a doubt the dumbest thing I have ever read on here.......Get a job, pardner!