by Sirdar
Nice plotlines, but it could stand a little less information and more explanation. There is much that anyone born after 1960 would have no concept of. Brought back lots of memories, some of them not so pleasant.
The plot became more intense as the story progresased which appeaaled to me. Keep up the good work, your efforts are appreciated.
Given the character and the setting, there was potental for something better with lots of fucking.
keep up the good work. can't wait for your next one.