All Comments on 'A Stitch in Time Pt. 02'

still good and interesting. thank you for intertaing us. Mike from Texas

You can't write the chapters fast enough. Please give this series eveything you've got because it is GREAT!

Thanks

David

My hat's off to you again Marsh. Can't wait for the next chapters. Great research by the way!

One of the best stories I've read in a while! It is great! CANNOT wait for the rest!

I almost never leave comments, but this story and the one before it are among the best on this site. Thank you, and I look forward to reading more/

You write some of the best fiction-that-has-sex-in-it stories. Thank you!

I am kind of shocked right now, going over this story, because this is probably one of the best stories I have read about redemption that I actually think of, since it's in an erotica website. Truly, I am extremely impressed and kind of sad as well that the story ended. I know the story was long, but so worth it that I wished there was at least another chapter focused on Patrick and Cammie. Wow, great characters, and awesome story. You are a simply awesome storyteller. And, I got to learn a lot about baseball as well.

i loved it man i hope that stephanie chick really gets hers for being a bitch :D

Man, not going to lie- I am loving this series atm. You've really captured (well) how someone would react in this guys situation.

serious kudos.

I haven't needed a dictionary for a definition in decades, but you've prompted my dusty skills of deduction from context. No glitches of grammar nor continuity to distract, and I'm enjoying a fun ride in the Twilight Zone. Thanks

Everytime I read this it is fresh.

This story has really grabbed me and I am thoroughly enjoying it. Right, onto the next installment.

The teenage angst is true to life.

I am really enjoying this series.

thank you

Moving along nicely, interesting concept.

Still going strong!!!

Great story. Love it when it's about good people just trying to live -- not manipulating anyone to get laid or basically raping them (however nicely worded) or guys treating women badly, etc. Thanks.

I mean FUCKING REALLY? Another damn fool? When the whole damn world looks at you like a murderer you should stop and fucking ask someone something. This guy is like no one In The history of the world. At least make the dude realistic. HUM EVERYONE TURNS THEIR BACKS ON ME AND MY FAMILY WONT LOOK AT ME AND EVEN THE TEACHERS ARE SHUNNING ME BUT I GUESS THATS JUST NORMAL. WTF? I’m not reading anymore. You are writing All this real stuff going on but his reaction is the most unrealistic any person could have.

Oh MarshAlien, You EVIL LOW LIFE TYPE AUTHOR, You went and wrote a story so good and so addictive... I HOOKED I tell ya, Hooked. AAAARGH.

NOW I'm going to read this thing to the very last word. It's like a potent Drug! The more you write, the more I want!!

(Thank you! 5*)

Turning into a shitty story.

Turned into a great story. The first chapter started strong but ending meh, this chapter was interesting from start to finish, much more mature and less shallow then chapter one.