All Comments on 'A Stitch in Time Pt. 05'

"A Stitch in Time", "The Genie Chronicles" and "Montana Summer".

You have met, if not surpassed, my favorites on this site.

Please don't ever end this story!!!!

Thank you

keep up the work, i really enjoy the read.

Keep em' coming. I check everyday.

Amazing, as always!

A good story, well written and interesting to a point. The problem is, I'm English and all this stuff about baseball goes right over my head, boring, boring, boring. How would you feel if I'd written a story that went into a blow by blow description of a cricket match, especially with all the jargon and statistics that are meaningless unless you have a grounding in the game?

I am kind of shocked right now, going over this story, because this is probably one of the best stories I have read about redemption that I actually think of, since it's in an erotica website. Truly, I am extremely impressed and kind of sad as well that the story ended. I know the story was long, but so worth it that I wished there was at least another chapter focused on Patrick and Cammie. Wow, great characters, and awesome story. You are a simply awesome storyteller. And, I got to learn a lot about baseball as well.

I absolutely love the description of the no-hitter Patrick throws. Hilarious writing. I literally laugh out loud when I read it.

Unfortunately, the story is getting a bit to stale for my taste, but it has excellent writing, plot, and characters which all come together for a rather nice story. I may come back to brush this story off later, but right now it's pretty bland :/

I am amazed at how entertaining this series is.

This story is well written and funny as hell.

I stumbled across this last night.

good writing, funny situations, lots of action and plenty of drama.

Great series still!!!

Loving it.

Really enjoying the humor.

One of the finest stories I've seen at this site. Sustained, coming off as real..so very good.

Great set of stories. I'm hoping that Andy and his family get sued for all the damages including breaking the door, medical expenses. Lost wages, etc.

At this point I dont get why Dave is in the story, hes written as a has been who doesnt bother turning up to his siblings events and they cant be bothered with him either, Dave is written as a guy whos in the way and dating his brothers ex who still wants to fuck the magical Trick. Trick a guy who didnt play baseball then became a top 5 draft pick straight from high school in only 3 years. Then Tanya a twat who wants exclusivety and only wants to be friends with benefits because Trick isnt the right religion.

Damn that’s such a great send off for a chapter..