All Comments on 'A Story'

Great stuff. Well done.

Keep up the great writing!

I'll tell you what...if this is a true story, you are one lucky man and my hero. Great writing, great story, and a true hard-on producer. Thanks for a fun read.

Hot story but when you say you're changing the names to protect the innocent, uh, make sure you keep your character names consistent. Abby = Julie on page 1, then she's Amy on page 3.

Gives the rest of us hope-lol. Need another story where you get to do Louise anally, and she and Abby do each other with a doubleheaded dildo. Great writing, a hot wanking story!

It's very rare when I find a story that I like so much that I rate it a 5, but this one is definately in that small percentile. Made me wish I were there to be a 4th! Thanks so much for getting me all hot and bothered. Cheers from America!

I agree - definitely want to read more!!! I should be writing an essay for uni but instead I am sitting here reading your story and getting so hot I think I shall need a session with my favourite toy before I can focus on anything so mundane as uni work!!! Please keep them coming (you can take that either way - lol)!!! BTW - if you ever happen to head Down Under I would be more than willing to meet up and assist in "developing further story lines" - he he he...

Thanks everyone for all these comments, and thanks also to all those who sent me private messages. Looks like I may soon have a few more real life stories to post here!

Thanks also for the point about the name changing. Julie on page one was a different person to Abby, but you're quite right - on page three I mistakenly changed it to Abby. That's not her real name - I was just getting mixed up with Amy, one of the characters in The Festival.

Anyway, if you enjoyed this one, please look out for more of my writing, and let me know what you think of it.

Nick.

Just wanted say - great writting with your Festival 1 - 6, Amy's Story, and now this one. Excellent imagination and description. I put these stories up there with the best fiction and true events stories on L/E. Keep it up. I'll be checking back often to read more in the future.

~MBG

Fantastic story, a real ball burster! It had me hot and bothered from the fisrt paragraph. If this is as true as you say, you have lived all of our dreams!!

I came as much as you did in your story. Then had to go find someone to fuck Excellent! If you ever have any girls too many please let me know! Tom

I came as much as you did in your story. Then had to go find someone to fuck Excellent! If you ever have any girls too many please let me know! Tom

I came as much as you did in your story. Then had to go find someone to fuck Excellent! If you ever have any girls too many please let me know! Tom

Great sex story.

One of the best stories I have ever read on Lit. If its true I must start writing!!!

This excellent story is right up there, if true, then your are at the peak of satisfaction..well done, to you all. Happy Days!

The bloke perspective is spot on. This story is an 11.