All Comments on 'A Story for Carin'

Love what you've done and anxious to read more of the adventures of your new girl. The potential seduction in the next story is alluring. Well written and very hot - thanks

I loved how you brought Sandra in Cari's life then her friend Joans but last Vicki. I am looking forward to reading about Dawn being a sub to Cari then into Sandra's life.

You have to bring in Sandra's husband to play with Cari...

Some more of Joan and Vicki or similar situations...

Great writing, thanks Sammie

Well done, a nice start. Two things, though.

1-It seemed a bit rushed at times, I think more detail could have been spent on some of the scenes.

2-I would have loved more detail on the scene in the dressing room with Joan and Cari, being in the room would have been very hot.

That being said, great work from one of my favorite authors. dawn1958 writes wonderful sex scenes and each part leads nicely into the next.