All Comments on 'A Story with Emotional Depth Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fantastic!

Wow.

I just spent two hours reading every single one of your stories and I have to say, I am very impressed.

Your stories are not just run-of-the-mill erotic stories. You actually build the characters and don't go straight to the climax. (Pun intended.) You actually capitalize and use punctuation. You don't use typical vocabulary and seem to enjoy telling these stories.

And damn, are they hot! I appreciate them because, not only do they pack one hell of a sexual punch, there is something about them that got me attached. I wanted to read everything I could from you.

Kudos, bud. Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
sensual

i love this series (and your other stories)! and i love "tell me" by bobby valentino, damn that's a hot song; definitely fit the situation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Touching

great stuff. so sad that this ended this way ):

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