by nageren
Yes yesssss
Some weak sides Gina showing in there :)
Trudging through a very realistic phase, and I like the way you describe their lovemaking, oh, physical interactions rather :)
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...is a strong continuation of the storyline. The characters are acting and talking and developing in a believable manner.
It will be very interesting, when in a couple of years, you bring this story to a conclusion. To go back and read it in it's entirety. This is promising to be a fascinating novel.
Keep up...refreshing ..it has great posibilities. I'm a sucker for happy endings but I'm a happy camper if you just keep on posting.
Thanks :)*****
She had problems before she went to his house and it looks they are still with her.
Lots of fun.
I’ve come back to read this entire story a few times now as it is reminiscent of agood novel.
I love her internal conflict. I love that she hates discovering he's a person, not just a pervert. Good job.