by LiveCat
I enjoyed this story. It was a complete story containing the love and the sex.
Well done and thank you.
What a great story. I loved the interactions between the main characters especially. I was laughing out loud several times while reading this, and awwwing as well. A wonderful blend of love, sex and storyline. Very well written, thank you for sharing!
This story was absolutely brilliant! One of my favorites! I had to read the last 3 pages again as I kind of rushed through them last night. I love the characters you create! Nice job! ~ L
Liked the con,should be on hustle,perhaps Livecat could be a screen writer,but wouldnt like to lose her from Lierotica
That was some story, my dear. I loved it, and I'm slowly reading through all your stories. Thanks once again for sharing your marvelous talent with us on this site. :-)
I have read this story multiple times and I enjoy it more each time. Your writing is wonderful. I can't wait for you to post more. :)
I was a little worried when they fell into a relationship so early in the story, thought that something might trip them up. So I was glad that it was resolving the issue with the ex that took up the rest of the story.
As I've mentioned in my comments on your other stories, I'm a happy ending kinda guy!
Definitely a case of love at first sight, or should i say,,, lust at first sight. lol A brilliant script with all the twists and turns of a suspense novel without losing sight of Sally and Becky's sexually charged relationship. They are both sensual and compliment each other in every way. I loved the way in which the ex got what was coming to him and more **grinning ** way to go Sally! LOVED IT!
Cat, you are rapidly rising to the top of my favorites.
I admit I originally came to Literotica looking for sex stories, but have quickly discovered that they soon become boring, that the real enjoyment is finding authors that create believable characters and real situations, and you fit that description to a "T"!
I loved your story. It kept me entertained and wanting to keep reading all the way to the end. So please keep writing I would love to read more.
So thank you again.
I really loved this story. It was long enough to build the characters, yet not so long as to become boring. Great job!
Great story. Touched me in every conceivable way. Hope will continue to impart you talent on this web page.
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I read this one a while back, but since I'm reading my way through your stories, I decided to read it again. Still love it! Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories with us!
Nice idea. Storytelling is a bit weak, and punctuation (especially at the end of speech marks, where something is always needed). But lovely sex, which is the main point after all.
LiveCat this is a brilliant story and hope you write more about you two Sally and Becky do they get married and have children as they feel like from the first they fell in love and I am waiting for the next story and soon I hope Live Cat I have read this story a few times brilliant. xx
Another lovely complex story with quite some ideas to impress ..... Wish i could walk over to this bar or use a boat to cross the river spending quality time in serenity
Longer. Slower. Deeper. Nicer.
No! I meant the story!
Fun ... and funny.
Though I hoped for something a little nicer for Tamsin...
Another good story!
You have a good way with words and your stories have a nice feel to them! A good mixture of life with passion and enough external drama to make the stories come to life!
Thank you!
Is there going to be a part 2?