by Green_Gem
Very nice and as usual with Gem's stories the sex sizzles right off the page.
Green Gem always writes a wonderful story! This is a great valentines story, with a new twist! The charachters are realistic, and Gem makes you want to know them. The sex is vivid and extremly erotic, written by an amazingly erotic woman! This should definitely be the valentines day winner!
I liked the way you used simple raw sex with no long-term emotional connection. Sex for the sake of sex! Nicely done. Paul
my card and addy are yours to use hope you check your draw and choose mine, greatplot, happy ending .Your story was good enough for me to look deeper into your style
While I tend to favor romance, I have to admit this was your usual barnburner! Good heavens woman! You sure have the talent to bring characters to life! Keep up the fine work! I'll deviate from the Romance category to read your stories anytime!
Bob from Bellevue
Green Gem, the finest writer on lit, again delivers an inventive, enthralling, and oh so hot story, with her trademark turns of phrase, and a little kink for good measure. i loved it....and i do mean loved it!
hugh jard
No one pushes the limits, gets more heat on the page, and delivers better characters than Green Gem. this is another superb story by the best writer on lit. congratulations!
Hugh
And it lives up to that billing. Terrific! ~Imp
I respect your ability to write an incredibly sexual story that incorporates the brain instead of just the body.
Mmmmmyummy. :)
What a great story!
Good characters, a nice plot and very hot sex.
And what fine writing. Gives me a mark to shoot for.
You mean I go through all this trouble of getting a card, candy, flowers and these expensive diamond earrings and all you really wanted for Valentine's Day was a good, hard rabid fuck:)Thanks for letting me know in time GG,Stardog
Great read.
That line summed up her desperation for me, great thinking.
Your stories are never anything less than "incredible". WOW! Wonderfully done, very exciting and yes, unusual...I mean, what are the chances of THAT happening IRL?
Very sensual, imaginative, creative, easy to read.
Did I mention that you're the best writer ever? *G*
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Have a great day,
~Sky~
As always, a wonderful combination of sexual fantasy and reality. A Green_Gem story on lit is always a treat.
Very good writing! The people seemed 'real' not like romance novel super lovers. Would like to see part 2,
and hear her thoughts as she ponders calling him.
I would write your number on my soul, love. Right next to your name.
Super job, GG. Great passion and tension. And HOT sex! eric
Another great story from Green Gem. One of the best stories I've read on lit. Not you're typical romance story, this one will have you continue reading and thinking throughout.
Terrific imagery and some really great turns of phrase. Hot sex and plenty of it. GG just gets better and better, and is starting to make it look easy now.
GG
Damn girl , your stories always seem to hit me right where they are supposed to. Thank You for writing this and many of your other stories...hope to see a special one soon.
Dominic
dominicfleeet@hotmail.com
GREAT story.. really drug me in... made me feel... Thank god I have the key to the executive washroom...
Great writing... excellent immagery!
AS always, Greem Gem has put togther an incredibly hot story written in a literate style that is all her own. The images she creates through the creative use of language would earn her an A-plus from any Creative Writing or English professor (and no doubt an invitation to meet with him/her during office hours!). fantastic, maybe the best yet by the best Lit author, by far.
Once again, Green Gem has proven herself to be the Goddess of Erotica. No one raises my blood pressure like her, with her unbelieveably erotic passages. I hold my breath until her next.
Dutchflyer
Another great story that will have me smiling the rest of the day. Can't wait to read your next one.
That was one of the most erotic, hottest stories I have read, especially like the bounce back theme to it. Exellent writing.
I've just read 4 of your stories (this one, the Amsterdam one, the Legal Analyze and the Halloween one) and you are my new favorite writer! Every word is note perfect, always fresh and so erotic, and believable all at the same time.
T
Very well written - lovely choice of descriptions and one was caught in the recklessness of it.
Perhaps it's the hopeless romantic in me but I can't help but feel disappointed in this story -- not because it wasn't well written but because I'd like them to have started up a nice relationship. I believe in serendipity and fate. If fate played out, they would have started up a new relationship and found sweet satisfaction in each other. That's just me though!
This is the second story i have read of yours this evening. I loved the content of both you are very talented creative. I love the way your mind thinks. Please keep on writing. MsM
This is the first time I've ever bothered to rate something....but that was pretty hot!