All Comments on 'A Stringed Instrument Ch. 09'

by Bramblethorn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
:)

Lovely, as always. Eagerly awaiting the next instalment.

jpb531jpb531over 11 years ago
Yay!

Wonderful. Can't wait for the next one.

biercebierceover 11 years ago
goodness gracious

A sweet lullaby in words. Thanks and looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A Lovely Story

I love your writing: well developed, sympathetic, believable characters; good use of language; hot sex. Please keep them coming. (No pun intended.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
GOOD STORY!

I don't miss any of your stories....I can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well done.

Really enjoying the story and look regularly for updates. I like both characters and the detail of their lives. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
AWESOME

I really loved the gradual unveiling of Yvonne's personality and vulnerability. You write with great passion and it shows in all your work.

Can't wait for more.

Aphra_

Rad'lRad'lover 11 years ago
Good story -

well told. Thanks for letting us read it.

ShikeShikeover 11 years ago
Please Continue!

I'm very excited to see where this story goes and how it ends.

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago
Good One!

Loved it so far....keep up the good work,can't wait to see what happens when RJ finds out his daughter has a girlfriend....

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Excellent

You are a wizard at writing my dear

LcnmdLcnmdover 8 years ago
Quite lovely!

A lovely and touching chapter to this amazing story of yours!

L

sissymidasissymidaalmost 8 years ago
Amazing Grace

you write with an amazing grace I've laughed thought deeply and been brought to tears often reading this amazing story

TheserialwaffleTheserialwaffleover 3 years ago

So far it’s like climbing a mountain. Each step the view is better! And the care they have about each other is beautiful. The vulnerability of Yvonne is so real. Thank you

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

Yes baggage is it what keeps us seperated from a relaxed loevly here and now ...... Love in the past is a memory, love in the future is a fantasy, the only true love we can live is in the Here&Now ..... Your story is much more of romance, love, emotions, trust, then sexual experiences and this makes it very touching ...... Wonderful piece of art , thank you

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Hi! Thanks for reading; I hope you find something in my work that interests you. Life has been very busy, and my writing has been one of the casualties. I have a couple of works in progress, no promises on when they'll be ready. If you want to know when I have a new story ou...

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