All Comments on 'A Summer in the Flesh Ch. 12-13'

I don’t even know where to begin. Hot, hot, hot !!!

I really didn’t think that your writing could get any sexier, but damn if it didn’t !

The characters were all good, except you mentioned Ted who never showed up before. I think it was a mistake. I don't know if you’ll ever write again, I hope so, but if you do please do yourself a favor and get a good editor. Your work suffers because of all the many miss spellings and wrong words and missing words.

Your writing is in a category that is truly rare. The quality is as good as the very best on this site and I’ve read thousands. It shouldn’t be demeaned by dumb grammar errors. That’s just lazy. Having said that, this chapter rates about 10-😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊’s from me. I’m still waiting for my lap dance. LOL !