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All Comments on 'A Summer to Remember Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVE

I wish I could do her stepdad!! Very well written 5 stars! Can't wait for Chapter 2!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Decent story but,

lots of little errors, misspelling, repetitions, etc. Proof read your story before submitting.

LoveBlossomingLoveBlossomingover 12 years agoAuthor
Misspellings

Sorry, I rely on spell check and am not really looking to post a finished piece, it's more just the story line rather than anything else, grammar and poor spelling will probably be found, I'll try to have someone look it over next time though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

Loved it even if there were spelling mistakes I still got great visuals

akwildmanakwildmanalmost 12 years ago
Yes!

That was a great beginning. Yes there were grammar errors, but nothing I can't live with. I would be honored to proof read for you anytime.

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I am most likely exactly as you think I am. I am a moderately tall woman in her early twenties with curly brown hair and hazel eyes. I have freckles on my shoulders, full lips, and strong cheekbones. Most of the women in my stories are based off of myself, women I am attracted...