by TripB0369
I've never heard of Power Girl, but I found this story well written. It was particularly nice that you didn't spend most of it being a superhero fan boy. Developing her personality as a real person with reasonable fears was a good idea.
have pirated my Wonder Woman fantasy! viva Linda Carter!
Fun read.........thanks!!
This is awesome! You should really do a sequel or at least another chapter that goes more in-depth with their relationship. Again, awesome story!
This is not a romantic story; it's a sci fi sort of thing and has nothing to do with real people. I guess there's a place for this sort of junk, but it would have been nice if you had warned us.
A vanilla Power Girl story that does good on the romance and the sex. It's certainly made its place in my hall of fame. You did a good job showing the chemistry between them, and making good use of PG's ever so sexy body when it counted. I wouldn't mind if you did another little PG story like this.
Some like things cold and some like it hot ... some think it a "1" and some think it a "5". Well I think it's a story I enjoyed. (no rhyme ... but a writer I'm not)