All Comments on 'A Surprise Gangbang'

bullshit story---No woman who has been raped "Loved it" or begged for more---Pure trash

First, this belongs in the "nonconsentual" category. Second, the whole story just sort of . . . ended. All the lead-up, then "Oh, and by the way, they fucked me a lot. Goodnight!"

Don't listen to them,it was rape that turn into lust. It read to me like a gangbang to me!!!!!!!!!!

Nice job of writing about a fantasy gangbang.

Thank you for not putting this in nonconsent because this slut was obviously enjoying the fuck of her life! Definitely a group sex spectacular. Quite good!

I guess nobody likes to get RAPED. Somebody might like to have a fantasy of many intrusive sex partners though... right? I might like reading about their fantasy too.

I guess other people might like writing of tender, lip quivering, labia soaking foreplay.

I might like reading that as well...

thank you! and thank you too!

ease up guys, she's just beginning her story career. love, you have a stunning picture and undoubtedly a body made for f*****g, but all that fine bod won't automatically translate to script and story; you will have to use your imagination and give attention to details. don't be in such a rush to finish your story. you can't carry your bed behavior to your story. you know what i'm talking about as you get older. as you mature you'll come to learn that getting there is more important than the orgasm. youth, unfortunately, treats sex like fast-food drive-thru. in time you'll come to understand it is to be approached as a 9 course meal - enjoy every dish. so, let your story develop in such a way that your readers are able to slip in and live through them vicariously. create some tension. in your story our heroine apparently never had one dreaded moment of fear even though she was going to be brutally raped by several large, long-dicked black men. there was no rape; this woman was/is a whore. and that's ok, but just don't try to convince us that she was violated. got it? good. you can do this, girl, so write us one now that is hot.

Forget all the self styled critics. The girl got screwed and she enjoyed it-- period. Just read it and enjoy it. I did. Bravo Ryanna

Loved the story, great writing, really erotic, one of the best non-conscent stories I have read. Great job.

One of the best stories I have read.......you should continue.

loved your story of how you knew you couldnt stop it so enjoy it ,maybe next time you will how afriend with you so she can enjoy it too

Off to read your other one's now.