All Comments on 'A Surprise Visit'

by twayciya

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Is it just me?

I couldn't even finish the story once i was the racism. To me that is just a wee bit disturbing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I agree with the above statement

BDSM is not about this at all...take the racism out of my erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Excellent Scene

I enjoyed your use of race-play mixed with the degradation and humiliation. Loved the aftercare as well. Great read!

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