All Comments on 'A Tale of Revenge Ch. 01'

This has got me interested in your other stuff. Thanks! Great start.

I love knowing that one of my stories inspired this one =) I think it's a pretty awesome start! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Gods and demons ran rampant over humans, TK U MLJ LV NV

This story has a Hunger Games feel to it. I hope you take this as a compliment....

@carole99 I only read the first but I will certainly take the compliment :)

THE ONLY THING I DIDNT QUITE UNDERSTAND, WAS WHY SHE WOULD STILL MAKE THE AGREEMENT WHEN SHE COULDNT KILL THEM. Bringing them to justis, hell she can do that by herself. The abilities he's given her allows her to torment them in the process, but she can't loose or alter her soul in the process. These things he ask of her seem to lack the enthusiasm of her quest. Which in turn is not a deal that would intrigue me. I am interested to see just how good this story turns out.. Oh... And he'll have access to her mind...that's no fun😢

So thank you for sharing this to us, I can't wait to finish.😆💋

Hi! Thanks for reading! I hope your enjoying the rest of the story as well.

I think the point is that Anna can't bring them to justice on her own. She wouldn't be able to find them much less punish them as just a girl with a grudge. She really had no choice but to accept the deal or turn away and leave everything behind, which we see she has a difficult time doing in almost ever case.

thanks again for your comment! looking forward to your thoughts on the next chapters.

I like what I see! Onward!

*mild spoiler alert*

Love love love love the moment near the end where he gives Anna a different power for every gift she gives him, it reminds me of the beginning of sleeping beauty when the fairies all give the baby princess gifts at her christening.

Thank you both for commenting! I hadn't thought of sleeping beauty but I'm glad it reads like a fairy tale:) I hope you guys enjoy the rest!

I like the way this story throws you right into the midst of this medieval setting and lets the background and characters grow organically. One small niggling question - wouldn't this God intervene when her mother/other female relatives were killed by the group of bandits she is after?

Disclaimer - I haven't read the rest so it might be explained later.

5 stars in any case.

I really like this! Looking forward to read this fic and to reading more of your works

This sounds promising. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Love the way this started, really enjoyed the way you introduced the characters, really hooked me! I felt immediately invested. Excited to read more.

Interesting characters and storyline. Mood and atmosphere perfectly set. Happy there's a plot and looking forward to following along.

I have been absent from Lit for some considerable time having resided in that wonderful bastion personal freedom, woman's rights, sexuality and of permissiveness called KSA, even with VPN the are watching....

It was so lovely discovering this little gem on my first foray into lit for a while. Madam your writing skills are great I have only read this chapter and part of the next chapter and look forward to seeing the updated Amazon version.

Please do continue to write for us here in Literotica though!

Thanks

Poesproppie!!

... the adventure begins. I like where the storyline appears to be going thus far. And it seems rather apparent you have knowledge of and can communicate in my native tongue of English! Well, that certainly doesn’t hurt either. Laugh if you will, but some stories I’ve scanned and quickly discarded seemed written by chimpanzees.

Most of what I've read so far on this site is just cheap smut to get my rocks off to. Not that there's anything wrong with that kind of site. It's why I came. (pun intended) But this... THIS looks like it has the makings of an actual, proper novel. Lots of promise. Hope it lives up to it.

Wow just brilliant I was mesmerised by this....