All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Long Time Friends'

excellent writing. don't leave us hanging, write a part two and finish the story.

I like the way you took your time developing this story, but please continue with it, don't leave us hanging.

This story was written quite well it allowed me to get into the story and build up excitement you gave just the right amount of back story for me into get into the characters loved your description. I would love to read more about these characters.

Two really good friends don't get it together until she loses weight, he's attracted to her and messes with her while he thinks she's sleeping. It that romance? The possibilities are here, but I would like to hear more about chemistry and about overcoming the socio-economic differences. I would like to know that moving from friendship to romance had more to it than her losing 20 pounds and he subsequently getting turned on.

good enough!...