All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 05'

i would have sent the bitch on. the company shouldnt pay the ransom as a matter of policy.

I would have sent that cheating bitch on her way as she clearly is only trying take what she wants from Alex and I believe the dad is only eing helped because the girl is pregnant with his child the mom should drop him seeing as he most likely was spending his time that way and the mom and son seem to be genuinely in love more so than anyone else in the story all in all you wrote a great series as it has stuck in my head

Hey should have just screwed her and told her to go home since she didn't even try to contact him and see what he had to say about the letter she received. (to hell with the tease)

You went for the pity fuck anyway? Really?! How is Charla going to forgive Alex? Then you are making them poor! Alex just needs to move on to college and live his life without either female, to much drama with both or either!

You bring in the EX, and she get what she wants. She needed to know what it felt like. Now she's going back to Jamal, leaving Alex with all these feelings. What a BITCH!!!!!!! Can't wait til she leaves or gets kicked out. What about Charla? Alone and poor?

A great set of stories but if to many things are going on it losses its sharpness. I have enjoyed thus far

I had been hoping to find more to this story by now. I even reread last few chapters to have it fresh and still is a hot remembering it all. please, I hope you are not walking away from it. ty/ bill

I have read this twice and i keep on checking on it i thought by now u would have had another chapter please don't end it like this

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS !

Tatonka likes to torture his readers, because he always leaves his stories half done.

Would have liked to see this story and "A Hot Wife Story" finished, but after the time lapse I don't believe that will happen.

An ending to a story is nice. But when things are left like that and never completed it leaves a bad taste to the readers. Everything up to now was great.

I wonder if you plan to continue this hot story? I would love to read more.

The fact that this story was never finished is a horrendous travesty of literature!

All of the questions at the end of this chapter STILL need answered.

Good story too bad the writer doesn't care enough to finish

I liked the stoery. Unfortunately, after 10-11 years the author has not found the time to finish the story.