All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 11'

this is a great story.

BRILLIANT hope they now get together i love a happy ending

I had heard that Grandmistress Lisa Jones was unhappy with the treatment this story was accorded on Lit. I hope these comments, and the others I have no doubt GMLJ will receive from his/her many fans, will prompt a reconsideration. GMLJ is a fine writer, and we need such writers on Lit. On a personal note, GMLJ's work is a pleasure to copy edit.

What a great story. just love your writing and hope you do not go to long. I first read one of your other stories some time ago, so I continue to come back for more. The stories are well thought out and the characters are very alive for me. Your style of writing is fantastic, I like all your stories. Hope you can resolve your differences with Literotica.

I am looking everyday for the next chapter. Great writing.

...how erotic it was. The cock and ball torture was very BDSM! Loved this interlude from relentless sex.