All Comments on 'A Taste of Heather'

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 12 years ago
why did she...

....behave this way???nanobots????

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 12 years ago
Rape is so much fun!

The only redeeming quality this story has - besides clean grammar and spelling - is that it is short. The author really should make an attempt to show us why Heather doesn't call the police

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
And the next day when he comes to her door

the police arrest him. But unfortuanately, despite being handcuffed and surronded by police, he attempts to escape. He trips and sustains numerous lacerations, fractures and somehow manages to crush his testicles.

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 12 years ago
the correct category but....

I agree with the others. I can understand why she submitted out of fear for her life.... but nothing was actually said about the possible consequences of his actions. Unprotected sex in an unprotected pussy.... or the rape she could charge him with. We just have to assume that she liked it enough to nod agreement to his plans for the next day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Okay

Yeah it's a well written story but rather unrealisitc. I suppose it's thw wishful thinking of a small deviant mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Why didn't she call the police?

I guess that she must have enjoyed being raped. Plus she agreed to see him the next day. Is she going to take the morning after pill or will she bear his child?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
wow tough man...

...fiction or not, if you get off on rape you're a cunt that needs his throat slitting.

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