by Danae72
i want to know how it ends already.. as usual - awesome story. i so want ryan to kick simons ass to make him see sense.
please post more soon.
i want to know how it ends already.. as usual - awesome story. i so want ryan to kick simons ass to make him see sense.
please post more soon.
As with every other series of yours that I've tried to read, what starts out promising is soon wrecked by sloppiness, silly characters (I'm an *animal*! he doesn't love me! boo-hoo!), and rushed writing. Important details or developments are moved past in less than a paragraph, character development is taken care of in simple, broad statements, etc.
I think you should ignore lame feedback from people without backbone enough to leave a name to identify them. You write very well and I find your stories very engaging, so please please disregard nonconstructive crap from retarded morons. Please write more soon, too!
I think ur series is great. Dont let people get to you they dont know good reading lol
I dislike Simon. I understand that he's not yet realized that he belongs with Micah, & that Micah has also kept important information from Simon, but Simon is just so selfish. That being said, I do love the angst! Well done!
I really hope that Simon gets slapped out of this dick attitude he has...I don't care if he is in denial. He's a dick!!!
Have to agree with Gene Simon needs a reality check and a slap upside of the head!!
That guy's a complete bastard. I think I like evil grandpa's spy, the ex boyfriend, better.