by BackseatRevolution
Very excellent beginning to the story. I got to the end and I was like, "damn, it's over". Looking forward to the next installment.
Hurry and post the next part. I really liked this and am looking forward to it.
This story makes you actually want to read more, and not wonder why a character is too submissive, or if it was not detailed enough. I want to know what happens next!
you stoped at the best part. jacking off going to have a good cum. then it stoped, what a TURN OFF .
You're story is great! More! More! More! More! More! You should keep writing.
This story was so amazingly HOT so far, but I NEED MORE!! Don't just stop the story here! Please write more!!
It was great! Loved it actually, one of my fav's on this site, i only wish you would continue it.
I really love this story. I wish you would consider finishing it. It is on of my favorites.
This was magnificent, please please, I beg of you. Finish it, your so good.
Your story is just woonderful.
Just a note: Does ANYBODY know how to use "your" and "you're" ? Guess which one denotes ownership, and which one means "you are" ?
Wonderful plot, the buildup has got me wanting more, can't wait to see what happens next.